Example #2 - What's wrong?

My name is Miki Ogawa.  In Japanese, my last name means “little river,” and my first name means “beautiful hope.”  I go to Hiroo Gakuen and am in the H1-9 class! 

I really like English, and this year there is a new English teacher.  Her name is Ms. Ching.  I took a secret picture of her, hahaha she looks like a hippopotamus!